Nice. But it's long. After hoping he had a nice Thanksgiving, start the letter at "I had issues at my polling place here in East Springfield and cannot say with certainty that my vote and my family's voteS were accurately counted." Eliminate the next sentence, he already knows that. Then start again at I find it highly concerning that ..." (put that s in)
"be allowed to snuff out..." should be "being allowed..."
"found out highly suspicious " ; should "out" be "it"? ;
" skeptical on what" ; try "skeptical of"
"Utilize article II..." ; try "by using article II and correcting this now we can not only prevent a stolen election but also restore faith in our election system and those responsible for securing elections in the future"
Great letter! Just offering suggestions, yours read well and the point was made. Good luck.
You wrote it x10 better than I would have, SEND IT! :)
Nice. But it's long. After hoping he had a nice Thanksgiving, start the letter at "I had issues at my polling place here in East Springfield and cannot say with certainty that my vote and my family's voteS were accurately counted." Eliminate the next sentence, he already knows that. Then start again at I find it highly concerning that ..." (put that s in)
"be allowed to snuff out..." should be "being allowed..."
Terrific letter.
"found out highly suspicious " ; should "out" be "it"? ;
" skeptical on what" ; try "skeptical of"
"Utilize article II..." ; try "by using article II and correcting this now we can not only prevent a stolen election but also restore faith in our election system and those responsible for securing elections in the future"
Great letter! Just offering suggestions, yours read well and the point was made. Good luck.
You, much like myself, like using "," too much. Go through and try to eliminate a few and make them full sentences. Like:
As an Erie County resident I feel it is of....
Happy to help. The content its good stuff fren.
I am pro-comma. They clarify. I would rather over-comma than under. I like your use of commas in this letter, didn't notice it.
You did great.
You did great❣️
Well written!
I am glad to know that Erie (C)ounty had representation...
I would capitalize that C.
Thank you for speaking for all of us.
Should have checked your post title first!