19 posted 140 days ago by Smegimus 140 days ago by Smegimus +20 / -1 23 comments share 23 comments share save hide report block hide child comments Comments (23) sorted by: top new old worst You're viewing a single comment thread. View all comments, or full comment thread. ▲ 2 ▼ – SpaceForceMilitia 2 points 140 days ago +2 / -0 You, much like myself, like using "," too much. Go through and try to eliminate a few and make them full sentences. Like: As an Erie County resident I feel it is of.... permalink save report block reply ▲ 2 ▼ – deleted 2 points 140 days ago +2 / -0 ▲ 2 ▼ – SpaceForceMilitia 2 points 140 days ago +2 / -0 Happy to help. The content its good stuff fren. permalink parent save report block reply ▲ 2 ▼ – Verrerogo 2 points 140 days ago +2 / -0 I am pro-comma. They clarify. I would rather over-comma than under. I like your use of commas in this letter, didn't notice it. permalink parent save report block reply ▲ 2 ▼ – deleted 2 points 140 days ago +2 / -0 ▲ 2 ▼ – Verrerogo 2 points 140 days ago +2 / -0 You did great. permalink parent save report block reply
You, much like myself, like using "," too much. Go through and try to eliminate a few and make them full sentences. Like:
As an Erie County resident I feel it is of....
Happy to help. The content its good stuff fren.
I am pro-comma. They clarify. I would rather over-comma than under. I like your use of commas in this letter, didn't notice it.
You did great.