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posted ago by MAGA_GRINGO ago by MAGA_GRINGO +12 / -0

God have mercy on my soul

This body is bridled in discontent

My Founding Fathers roll

Life or liberty, both are present

Enemies, foreign and domestic

My shores are filled with both

It is now, I will be tested

We'll all be far from home

Steady my hand dear God, make my aim true

For the life of these commies, let me see them through

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CyrusKingOfAnshan 2 points ago +2 / -0

Not bad.

Do a reread out loud you'll find some breaks in the rhythm

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CyrusKingOfAnshan 1 point ago +1 / -0

I'm sorry, can you reiterate?

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CyrusKingOfAnshan 2 points ago +2 / -0

thanks,"be the decency you want to see in this world" or something...