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Redditcanblowme 2 points ago +2 / -0

I would've used the word "cocksuckers" but your way works too.

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Bindiesel101 2 points ago +2 / -0

Nailed it.

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HidinginNY 1 point ago +1 / -0

Should make it more personal, really twist the knife.

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consumptiveballerina 1 point ago +1 / -0

Needs more raw, visceral anger.

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cicero21 1 point ago +1 / -0

just perfect.

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MAG_n_KAG 1 point ago +1 / -0

not enough

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unbeknownst 1 point ago +1 / -0

Not enough.