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Durdurdurkistan 3 points ago +3 / -0

My only critique is that the format is more of a Sunday night chat by the fire instead of a trial. He also does the very annoying and attention-killing method of listing every single detail of an analysis in a speech. He needs to SUMMARIZE.

There’s a lot of fluff and meandering. It needs to be condensed to 30/45 minutes of straight to the point articulation. This is the age of sound bytes, not 2 hour ramblings.

Good stuff, but the fluff needs to go.