13 HYPOTHETICALLY - NEED OPINIONS ON OPTIMAL CONTENT FOR A STAMP ON CERTAIN WIDELY CIRCULATED SLIPS OF GREEN PAPER (media.patriots.win) posted 54 days ago by Linnaeus 54 days ago by Linnaeus +13 / -0 7 comments share 7 comments share save hide report block hide child comments Comments (7) sorted by: top new old worst You're viewing a single comment thread. View all comments, or full comment thread. ▲ 2 ▼ – MyAuntFanny 2 points 54 days ago +2 / -0 Too wordy. Those slips of paper already have enough numbers. I'd lose the bits in the middle and just use the 1st line and the website. permalink save report block reply ▲ 1 ▼ – Linnaeus [S] 1 point 54 days ago +1 / -0 My thought was to have at least one fact point included. But if its too wordy, I guess you're right. Thank you. permalink parent save report block reply ▲ 2 ▼ – MyAuntFanny 2 points 54 days ago +2 / -0 Just my opinion, and I'm no expert. Can that thought be shortened to something pithy and just 4 or 5 words? permalink parent save report block reply
Too wordy. Those slips of paper already have enough numbers. I'd lose the bits in the middle and just use the 1st line and the website.
My thought was to have at least one fact point included. But if its too wordy, I guess you're right. Thank you.
Just my opinion, and I'm no expert. Can that thought be shortened to something pithy and just 4 or 5 words?