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SwampGirlAZ 3 points ago +3 / -0

Excellent! If I can offer any advice it would be to condense it even more than you already have. “Punch” her in the gut with your strongest words at the very beginning. And keep it as short as you can get it.

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SJBHamilton [S] 2 points ago +2 / -0

It's already a lot shorter than the first one.

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CuomoisaMassMurderer 1 point ago +1 / -0

How'd you open it?