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ProudAmerican 2 points ago +2 / -0

Yeah, when posts get this long it’s easy to lose sight of the intention one is trying to implement. He was kinda all over the place and lost some cohesion of the message. Like music, if you go to the last measure, you can usually figure out the tenor and conclusion of the piece. It’s the same with writing, but his last few sentences are not in line with one another. It’s like he gathered thoughts from multiple ideas and congealed them in one long post while also having a little bit of animosity for having a post removed at some point previously.

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