The banality of the non-specific front part allows the peon whose job it is to mentally skip along 'yeah yeah, ok.' - but the punch reverses it.
So not: "Joe Biden says ..." but "Some guy said ....... is that a problematic statement by Joe?"
I don't know Ibram Kendi, I haven't looked up his quotes, etc, but things like that. Maybe some exact quote with the edges filed off so the 'actors' are unidentified, etc.
I like the approach "Bury the Lede".
It's intentionally putting the "punch" part last.
The banality of the non-specific front part allows the peon whose job it is to mentally skip along 'yeah yeah, ok.' - but the punch reverses it.
So not: "Joe Biden says ..." but "Some guy said ....... is that a problematic statement by Joe?"
I don't know Ibram Kendi, I haven't looked up his quotes, etc, but things like that. Maybe some exact quote with the edges filed off so the 'actors' are unidentified, etc.
Correct, for sure I need to be careful with my wording, thanks for the suggestion.