I think "Blackmailed Washington" "Our White House Included" does not make sense with the clips you put it into context next to.
Personally, I know what you are getting at, if I were to show this to my family, they'd be like "wtf is this video trying to tell me" and it might turn them off the rest.
Maybe I'm overthinking it, but just my critique. I think it should start off a bit less bombastic. Everything else is great!
It’s really hard to show people that they were blackmailed and the reaction to trump through the rest of the video tried to put those lines into context. Any ideas how that can be softened to invite folks into the narrative from there?
I’m going to ponder this point you’ve made and ask folks I chat with regularly what they might suggest in response to your feedback.
or something to that effect. Make it a point that they are friendly and intermingling but don't automatically shoot towards corruption.
Also, if I may, I think in the first few frames, having Opera instead of epic music would be a nice touch. It reinforces the idea that these people live entirely different lives than the rest of us.
“In close relationship with high office” is a way better approach than jumping to blackmail, it softens and rounds off the message of corruption and lets it evolve in the narrative of the video.
I’m quite limited on the library of non copyright music available that I know how to find. I’ll look around for other music that strikes the daydream tone and see if it feels right.
Can’t make promises on music, that’s been a challenge for this project. But I do wish I had different music than I have because it doesn’t quite set the intended tone but gets closer than any other source I’ve found.
Are those references obvious? I tried to downplay it as much as possible but it’s hard to get away from it. I think there are 2 throw backs to QAnon in there with them bashing an online conspiracy theory and the tweet. I tried to present it but move on from it as fast as it’s brought into the narrative.
The idea I intended in the videos is to take them briefly into conspiracy per their words and dip their toe to show how the media reacted to people talking about the subject of trafficking. So there is an intentional degree of it in there because it’s inescapable, any time any group organizes to debate it, they are labeled conspiracy theory.
Any and all nitpicky feedback welcomed. Trying to make this something every one wants their liberal friends to watch and something that will give them answers to the chaos that has them so lost and demoralized. It aims to offer them a champion where the left has failed to give them one. I did my best to lead those center left folks to an easy answer as I could, community feedback has been essential in this process. Your feedback will have a direct impact on the results so don’t hold back!
It is great. Makes me want to say that their trial is allready done in the courts of the law of men and god, only one left like hillary said were all gonna be locked up. Well done
at 9:25 it says "only your can stop them"
Ahaha oops 🤦🏼♂️! Thanks for catching it
I'll be nitpicky:
I think "Blackmailed Washington" "Our White House Included" does not make sense with the clips you put it into context next to.
Personally, I know what you are getting at, if I were to show this to my family, they'd be like "wtf is this video trying to tell me" and it might turn them off the rest.
Maybe I'm overthinking it, but just my critique. I think it should start off a bit less bombastic. Everything else is great!
That’s exactly the feedback I need.
It’s really hard to show people that they were blackmailed and the reaction to trump through the rest of the video tried to put those lines into context. Any ideas how that can be softened to invite folks into the narrative from there?
I’m going to ponder this point you’ve made and ask folks I chat with regularly what they might suggest in response to your feedback.
I'm brainstorming here:
Maybe instead of saying
Say:
or something to that effect. Make it a point that they are friendly and intermingling but don't automatically shoot towards corruption.
Also, if I may, I think in the first few frames, having Opera instead of epic music would be a nice touch. It reinforces the idea that these people live entirely different lives than the rest of us.
Something like this
“In close relationship with high office” is a way better approach than jumping to blackmail, it softens and rounds off the message of corruption and lets it evolve in the narrative of the video.
I’m quite limited on the library of non copyright music available that I know how to find. I’ll look around for other music that strikes the daydream tone and see if it feels right.
I like that, sounds great! As for the music, not a huge deal if it can't be done. Just a thought.
https://www.bitchute.com/video/5xcQdIOQmqd9/
Revised on your input. Going live today! Thank you for your help :)
Can’t make promises on music, that’s been a challenge for this project. But I do wish I had different music than I have because it doesn’t quite set the intended tone but gets closer than any other source I’ve found.
I’ll be updating titles for sure though
Any thing stand out that could be better?
very nice! good work my dude.
Are those references obvious? I tried to downplay it as much as possible but it’s hard to get away from it. I think there are 2 throw backs to QAnon in there with them bashing an online conspiracy theory and the tweet. I tried to present it but move on from it as fast as it’s brought into the narrative.
The idea I intended in the videos is to take them briefly into conspiracy per their words and dip their toe to show how the media reacted to people talking about the subject of trafficking. So there is an intentional degree of it in there because it’s inescapable, any time any group organizes to debate it, they are labeled conspiracy theory.
Any and all nitpicky feedback welcomed. Trying to make this something every one wants their liberal friends to watch and something that will give them answers to the chaos that has them so lost and demoralized. It aims to offer them a champion where the left has failed to give them one. I did my best to lead those center left folks to an easy answer as I could, community feedback has been essential in this process. Your feedback will have a direct impact on the results so don’t hold back!
It is great. Makes me want to say that their trial is allready done in the courts of the law of men and god, only one left like hillary said were all gonna be locked up. Well done
In good time :)
BRAVO!!!!!! Very powerful, imo. I was watching as a normie, forgot we were supposed to be looking for oops'. Sorry. But I loved it!!